Pretty pout

[Freddycr]

For daddy. :)

[Adaptive]

I can tell this is an unedited photo and I'm sure you're already aware of most the the flaws but I'll tell you anyways just incase you might have over looked something.

background needs to be cleaned up, got something going on behind the chair's back.
lens flare on the chair back somewhat below her wrist.
also there's white showing on the far right side of the pic towards the bottom.


lighting
to me it looks alittle on the flat side. by looking at the pic I can see where you positioned the lights. Maybe insted of having them point directly at her let only the 1/4, 1/3, or 1/2 of the softbox or umbrella point directly towards her.

use liquidify tool on her tummy


Will be great once you get around to editing it.

[savona]

Is that your daughter? If so I hope you have a shotgun! :)

Aside from what Adaptive pointed out (I dont see lens flare though) the photo is great. A tad hot on her left arm, but not a big deal to me. Thanks for sharing.