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Toe Knee"F"
12-18-2009, 01:22 AM
Took these using the 50mm 1.8 natural light
savona
12-18-2009, 10:42 AM
LOVE them! The second is very nicely done. Your lucky to have such a beautiful in house model!
Adaptive
12-18-2009, 11:50 AM
That looks like the shirt and hat you used for your family portrait!!!
She must have stripped you down and stole you cloths!! you poor guy!!
:)

But I agree with savona, that second shot is niiiiiiiiiice!!
Lucky man your girl is hottttt
:)
jt3
12-22-2009, 07:53 PM
yes! The right portrait is perfect ! I like the expression
Sarcoman
12-22-2009, 08:58 PM
Both of these shots are outstanding. If I had to pick a favourite, I would say the first one... but they are both very nice.
tims
12-27-2009, 07:49 PM
She's very easy on the eyes.

Great idea and shots. I prefer the first. I'm not a big fan of the pinstripe shorts, but that reflection of her in the mirror is a gem.

Second one is great too. Feels like a combination of sepia and B&W. The sharp white pinstripes actually caught my attention before the open blouse. Now there's a feat!
And the white cylinder thing (candle?) in the bottom right is slightly distracting.

But, then again, maybe you'd rather have me staring at a candle instead of your wife's open blouse. lol
Adaptive
12-28-2009, 06:17 PM
But, then again, maybe you'd rather have me staring at a candle instead of your wife's open blouse. lol

Oh snap i didn't even notice that!
Maybe I was distracted by the candle?
Walkabout
12-30-2009, 05:41 AM
damn, I wish that mirror was wider...the lower one is my favourite, right down to the tones. (except of course, the mirror being NOT wide enough!)
I think the upper one, I would have preferred the focus on the mirrored image, but thats simply a matter of preference, composition, and I firmly believe there is no "right or wrong' despite all the rules governing it. Composition is expression, artistic expression, and rules don't sit well with me when it comes to that. Right down to the "rule of thirds', etc...
Perhaps thats why I find it so hard to critique imagery, who am I to say it's "right or wrong?"
We can only offer what me may do different, but I think more importantly, technical suggestions. I prefer to leave the comp to the creator. That said, use a wider mirror next time, dammit! (cheeky grin)
She's quite stunning, your lass...