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[highwayman]

Did not really get the feeling out of this picture that I wanted. Some of the tailligts were very harsh in some places. Wanted to capture driving through a city at the time that everybody dreads. 5:30

[Richard A Busch]

I think it does stand out. I don't disagree that there is something missing but I do like it alot. might be the trafic on the otherside being lighter or missing lightto the left or the no break lights to the right not sure. Add letters to the sign. Making it funny?

Richard

[SNAPaPHOTO]

I think Richard is on to something add something funny on the sign, and you got it.
Mark

[highwayman]

Thanks for the idea. Not had much chance lately to work on photos, but will try to work on it and repost when I can.

[Fibonacci]

I agree with others who say this image has some things going for it. No, the composition is not particularly strong, but I like the overall grayness of the image which is very much in keeping with your theme. I am not a big fan of selective color, but in this case it works very well for you. The fact that all of the taillights are bright red and all of the cars are shades of gray speaks to your message. I'd give you and 'A' for effort with the caveat that you really need some strong compositional elements to complete the process.

[highwayman]

I appreciat the feedback and I may try to work on this pic some more later. The composition I cannot do much about. I run solo in the truck so it is "point and click" and see how the picture turns out afterward.