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  1. Bride's Maids

    One of my favorite pictures from my best friend's wedding.


  2. I would have liked to see the first girls legs. Pretty good shot though and what a great location for a wedding. It must have been beautiful.

    P.S. Needs a curves and contrast adjustment!
    Canon 5d · 17-40mm f4L · 24-70mm 2.8L · 70-200mm f4L · 50mm f1.8 II · 35mm f2 · 550 ex

  3. The subjects are a little distant, would have been nice to get up close and personal!

  4. More girls, less sky.
    Sometimes it helps to get down to their level or kneel down
    For some reason this looks like you shot from overhead.
    Canon 1D Mark III -- Canon 5D
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  5. Join Date
    Dec 2009
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    Gainesville, Florida
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    This image is just a hairbreadth away from being something truly special but you have a couple of things working against you. First, from a composition standpoint you have divided the image in half with the brush line at the back of the beach so it almost looks like two different images: what is below the line vs. what is above the line. This can sometimes work if the two halves are somehow related, but I see no such relationship here. Some judicious cropping could improve this image significantly. And, yes, the levels and contrast need some work as well.

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