This kiss, this kiss!!!

[teardr0p1204]

[QuaziPhoto]

The first shot had highlights which are too blown out. All the whites kind of blend together. But good feeling...

The second shot is nice, I dont know about the angle, but I like how you left the lamp in the foreground. Its something most would shy away from.

[ranepaps]

The concept of the first photo was ok. You just need to adjust the exposure.

[savona]

I love the concept of that first photo, very creative! I see the point of the poster above, it does seem slightly blown out in the white, but the feel is there and that is all that matters to me!

[wideopen]

beautiful work

[Fibonacci]

I saw an ad once for a photographer who had once been a high fashion photographer in New York and was now shooting weddings in Miami. I was curious to see how he blended the two styles. As you might expect, every shot was absolutely crisp in focus and exposure. What I did not expect was that every shot was taken at an angle like your second shot here. It was kind of his signature. Angles like this create a kind of energy in an image and young couples tend to find that kind of energy appealing. However, a little goes a long way; I don't think most couples would want a whole album full of these kinds of images. What keeps your shot from being stunningly good are the distractions: the piece of wall and the lamp. As a photographer you are responsible for everything in your image so there is no excuse for these to be there. Pause, take a step to the left and take the shot; it will still be there. Patience is a virtue in photography, too.